updates where made to the description and a minor one for the actual art

I was originally going to color this but after I did I noticed 2 things
1. I liked the black and wight one better
2. it does look better, manly because of the effort I put into this one

I have a lot more to talk about, description would be a start, but I'm late for swimming practice so I'll update this afterwards....

Back from swimming update:

hm.. I'm thinking I should've titled this 'to fall'

For us, as humans, it was and still is our greatest dream to fly. I don't know weather it's our greedy desire to poses everything or wether flying represents the freedom we all seek, but for me I think it's just the feeling, the feeling you get when falling.
I'm assuming that everyone got a chance to jump of the high board at least once. it's really fun when you jump from the hight of about 3 or 5 m(that's not the high board) but when you jump from the 3rd floor(7 m) and up it becomes a completely different story.
I remember the first time I tried it I was so scared, I figured it's be the same as the 5 m board so I jumped, I was surprised to actually feel the wind pushing me up, it was incredible I had to try it again. The the forth floor(10m, about 11 Yards for my American friends) was also amazing and a lot scarier too. Jumping that distance ,no matter how many times I try it, never gets old, well maybe after 10 times strait, you know how people say never look down, I should listen to those people Never look down(except if your already in the air, you kinda have to).

regardless I'm staring of topic(my friend was right I do wright terrible essays, and now I have to go to sleep because of the stupid morning swimming practice, can't a guy get a chance to go all wise and stuff ), anyway my point is I'm a freak who wants to fly just so he can fall, I'm guessing it's the adrenaline rush you get, the higher it is the more I feel like I should just jump.
Don't get me wrong I'm an engineer so I know that jumping 10 m on something other than water would cause an impact of about 700 N, breaking my legs along with every bone in my body, anything higher would break my skull and splattering my brain all over the ground heck 100m above water would do the same trick so I'm not doing it, I just think it might be fun(you know until the splattering bla I'm dead part).
________________________________________ _____

this should do it(I think) know I'm being forced to sleep so I'll continue with the credits later on
I might add the story of my 3 days of torture attempting to draw this

also I found out that in the military I'll be forced to jump 30 m above sea level that's like 33 Yards so I'm a bit scared but I think it'd be exciting